Asad's Story

1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
yes, that you should be careful with loans

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
yes, the solution is to be smart about taking out a loan

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
not really

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
it kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
yes, great intro

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
yes

7. Is the writing clear?
crystal